Woah...

This song gives me chills...
You are tooooo good at making music.
Find a producer and make a major hit.
DO IT!

Suicide Club

Hah, I love this song, just like all your songs.

This song really reminds me of the movie, Suicide Club. It's a Japanese horror movie.

I think I see what you're going for...

But I would just work on adding a bit more. It might help to add a bit more to this. It feels really empty at times.

Also I would say try to make it sound a little more professional. This sounds just like a jam session.